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The city streets were occupied, with messy, riotous traffic noises. Even though this city is named ‘the city of lanterns’, no light is perceptible.
The moon was beginning to fade away and the dark blanket collapsed on the buildings slowly. The commuters were getting out of the trains, and started walking away.

A boy was in the car, glazing out the window he felt vaque. Staring outside looking at the lamp, the water drops were sliding down, curling down the pole to the floor and it was collected into a small pond underneath. The rain showered down on the floor as if it wanted the floor to suffocate.
It was a plain atmosphere, it was dark and drowsy, and the night was starting to become deprived. It almost felt as if the night was yawning from the sound of the wind. The boy yawned as well. Inside the building was a young woman, her room was undecorated, her bed was messy. Her blonde hair was knotted. Her eyes had blankets under. She was stressed, and her aura was emitting stress. She was typing as if it was her last minute.
She stopped.
And sighed.
She rested her cheek on her hand, and receded back from the table, stared at her screen and sighed again. But then, she looked out the window and her was lightened. It was a dark night and they were soft intricate detailed shapes. They were like soft, silky patels sinking down. It was like small white fairies flauting down in the air e

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The downtown streets were crowded with a cacophony of chaotic, raucous traffic sounds. Even though this city is called "the city of lanterns," there is no visible light. The moon was waning as the black blanket slowly began to fall over the buildings. The people exited the trains and began walking away.

A young man was in his automobile, and as he glared out the window, he felt vague. While staring out the window at the light, the water droplets slid down the pole, curling down to the floor and collecting in a little pond underneath. The rain pelted the floor as if it wanted to suffocate it.

It was a simple environment, gloomy and lethargic, and the night was becoming depleted. The sound of the wind nearly gave the impression that the night was yawning. The youngster, too, yawned. Within the structure lived a young lady; her room was unadorned, and her bed was untidy. Her blonde hair was tied back in a bun. Her eyes were concealed by covers. She was tense, and her aura radiated tension. She was typing as if it were the tenth hour. She came to a halt. Additionally, he sighed.

She leaned her face on her palm and stepped away from the table, glancing at her computer and mumbling once more. However, as she peered out the window, her mood improved. It was a dark night, and the forms were delicate and complicated. They sank like delicate, silken pates. It appeared as though little white fairies were flaunting in the air.

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What can be inferred after reading Catherine's (Myrtle's sister) testimony to the police​

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In 3-5 sentences, write a paragraph that includes a claim about your favorite movie or television show, the description of a
counterclaim, and an explanation of why the counterclaim is invalid.

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What is the main purpose of stage directions in a play?

A. Stage directions tell the director how many characters to cast.
B. Stage directions tell the actors how to dress.
C. Stage directions tell the audience how they should think and feel.
D. Stage directions tell the actors how to speak and act.

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What, if anything, makes the following thesis statement weak?

When the protagonist of Henry James's The Portrait of a Lady, Isabel Archer, finds herself confronting swindlers eager to scam her out of her fortune, the plot reveals the author's mistrust of "new world" values over "old world" traditions, raising questions about the future of society.

a) It does not address meaning, or the "so what?"
b) It fails to provide a rationale for the position.
c) It is not arguable or defensible.
d) It is not specific.
e) Nothing; this thesis statement is effective.

Read the lines from Canto V of The r*pe of the Lock and answer the question.

Some thought it mounted to the Lunar sphere, Since all things lost on earth are treasur'd there. There Hero's wits are kept in pond'rous vases, And beau's in snuff-boxes and tweezer-cases. There broken vows and death-bed alms are found, And lovers' hearts with ends of riband bound, The courtier's promises, and sick man's pray'rs, The smiles of harlots, and the tears of heirs, Cages for gnats, and chains to yoke a flea, Dry'd butterflies, and tomes of casuístry. These lines offer a possible explanation for where the lost lock has gone, but they also offer Pope another chance to satirize behaviors.

What are his satirical targets in this passage? What do the targeted behaviors, and the people who behave in these ways, have in common? In a written response at least 200 words, answer these questions using details from the text. Include in your response an explanation of whether Pope's satire in this section is Horatian or Juvenalian.​

Read the poem.

A March in the Ranks Hard-Prest, and the Road Unknown
from Drum-Taps
by Walt Whitman

A march in the ranks hard-prest, and the road unknown,
A route through a heavy wood with muffled steps in the darkness,
Our army foil’d with loss severe, and the sullen remnant retreating,
Till after midnight glimmer upon us the lights of a dim-lighted
building,
We come to an open space in the woods, and halt by the
dim-lighted building,
‘Tis a large old church at the crossing roads, now an impromptu
hospital,
Entering but for a minute I see a sight beyond all the pictures and
poems ever made,
Shadows of deepest, deepest black, just lit by moving candles
and lamps,
And by one great pitchy torch stationary with wild red flame and
clouds of smoke,
By these, crowds, groups of forms vaguely I see on the floor, some
in the pews laid down,
At my feet more distinctly a soldier, a mere lad, in danger of
bleeding to death, (he is shot in the abdomen,)
I stanch the blood temporarily, (the youngster’s face is white as a lily,)
Then before I depart I sweep my eyes o’er the scene fain to absorb it all,
Faces, varieties, postures beyond description, most in obscurity,
some of them dead,
Surgeons operating, attendants holding lights, the smell of ether,
the odor of blood,
The crowd, O the crowd of the bloody forms, the yard outside
also fill’d,
Some on the bare ground, some on planks or stretchers, some in the
death-spasm sweating,
An occasional scream or cry, the doctor’s shouted orders or calls,
The glisten of the little steel instruments catching the glint of
the torches,
These I resume as I chant, I see again the forms, I smell the odor,
Then hear outside the orders given, Fall in, my men, fall in;
But first I bend to the dying lad, his eyes open, a half-smile gives he me,
Then the eyes close, calmly close, and I speed forth to the darkness,
Resuming, marching, ever in darkness marching, on in the ranks,
The unknown road still marching.

In “A March in the Ranks Hard-Prest, and the Road Unknown,” readers can infer the speaker is shocked by the scene he encounters when his troop stops at the church.

Which lines from the poem support this inference?


“Entering but for a minute I see a sight beyond all the pictures and poems ever made,”

“We come to an open space in the woods, and halt by the dim-lighted building,”

“Till after midnight glimmer upon us the lights of a dim-lighted building,”

“‘Tis a large old church at the crossing roads, now an impromptu hospital,”

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Emilee is the head of a large veterinary hospital. She takes care of many duties to keep the hospital up and running. That is why Emilee has put Alonzo in charge of Human Resources. What types of duties might Alonzo have in this position? Does allowing Alonzo to handle things like hiring new vet techs or filing the employee health insurance forms mean that Emilee does not care about the hospital? Explain how Alonzo’s position benefits Emilee in her job.

Choose the best ending sentence for the paragraph down below

Which statement from "The Lakota Music Project Hopes to Connect People through Music" most likely describes the author’s position towards the Lakota Music Project?.

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We need to ban the use of jet skis on Leech Lake. Simply put, the residents of Leech Lake are sick and tired of the noise. We cannot fish the way we used to because all of the fish are scared by the sound of the jet skis. Forget relaxing! No matter where you are on the lake, you can hear the blaring motors. Of course, jet ski owners will probably protest that they have a right to enjoy themselves, too. Why should the majority suffer for the benefit of a precious few? The time has come for regulations on the use of jet skis. Otherwise, Leech Lake will be ruined.

Based on the passage, it is clear that the author wants readers to
A.
appreciate the ways in which jet skis are a fun alternative to motor boats.
B.
sympathize with the residents of Leech Lake who do not use jet skis.
C.
learn to enjoy fishing and relaxing in addition to riding jet skis.
D.
use jet skis on Leech Lake only during the daytime hours.

5 “super” prefix words
Define and use in sentences.

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Harry works all the time. He ______.

A. never relaxes

B. relaxes never

C. often relaxes

D. relaxes sometimes

Which details from the story best supports the answer to Part a cell one

What dreams do you believe the Founders of the United States had? How are they similar to the dreams of those who participated in the Civil Rights Marches?

What is Roosevelt talking about in "The Four Freedoms"?

How does the conflict in the Animal Farm excerpt relate to the events in the historical passage?

what does the root cred mean in the word credulous

My father makes the most delicious spaghetti dinners in the world

Critically analyse the poem Goodbye Party for Miss Pushpa TS by Nissim Ezekiel.

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Come up with 5 examples of oxymorons and use in sentences.

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