Can someone please help me with this?!!

Revise the paragraphs below by combining sentences, fixing faulty parallelism and coordination, and correcting other sentence faults such as fragments and run-ons.

Answer:

Looks good revisions below

Explanation:

Ok so you say State House twice in the first sentence, so maybe you could try using other words.

You also say, "Now known as the Liberty bell." And you say it right after saying that we call the hall Independence Hall, so say something like:

'And now, we call the bell, Liberty Bell.'

Put a comma after Pennsylvania Assembly. (First paragraph Fourth Sentence)

When you say "It would right to call lawmakers to meetings." Did you mean ring?

In paragraph 2, connect sentences 4 &5.

Otherwise it looks really good! You got good skill!!!

Hopefully that helped!

Lady Macbeth refers to many events and conversations in her sleep-walking scene.
Textual Evidence

HELP ASAP This is the first paragraph of Tanyika’s analytical essay.
The main character in this story seems foolish at first because she doesn’t follow the advice of the elders in her clan. She is very beautiful, and several young men want to marry her. She refuses all of them, and instead decides to live alone. Later, she avoids starvation by becoming an expert fisherwoman.
What should you say to Tanyika about this paragraph, if you become part of her peer review group?
A)"This summary of the story is very clear. Your first paragraph should state an actual claim about the story, though--something you have to prove."
B)"I think we both agree that the main character should have married when she had the chance. I didn’t like the story much at all. Did you?"
C)"It is impressive how the main character becomes such an expert in a valued activity. However, that’s not really how the story ends."
D)"Clearly, you believe that the main character is a strong young woman who has her own ideas. That’s not how I see it, though."

Who is to blame for the crew’s death? Odyssey or the crew?

External conflict is a struggle with an outside force. Which of the following are examples of external conflict?a. A sailor must sail his small ship through a violent storm. b. A girl feels guilty about lying and confesses to her parents. c. A boxer faces his rival in the boxing ring.d. A teenager gets a role in the school play and must face his stage fright.​

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Identify the adjective clause in the sentence: My mom wanted to spend her birthday doing her favorite activity, which was going to Marshalls and scouring the clearance racks.

A. which was going to Marshalls and scouring the clearance racks
B. My mom wanted to spend her birthday doing her favorite activity
C. scouring the clearance racks
D. My mom wanted

Enter several persons of both houses, who join the fray;

then enter Citizens, with clubs and partisans.

Citizens: Clubs, bills, and partisans! strike! beat them down!

Down with the Capulets! down with the Montagues!

—Romeo and Juliet,
William Shakespeare

What do these stage directions help the reader understand?

The Capulets are the winners.
The Montagues are the winners.
Members of both families call for weapons.
Citizens attack both families with weapons.

Super easy but I over think please help!
How should the subject-verb agreement in this sentence be changed. If at all?
Sarah and her sister ran to catch the bus, but they were too late.
A.they was too late
B.she were too late
C.she was too late
D.No change

A friend of yours threw an extravagant party to celebrate something that doesn’t require so much spending. Is there a better way of saying, " She did all this to celebrate... "

PLS HELPPPPPPPP IM MARKING BRAINLEIST + HEART + 20 POINTS

Read the excerpt from "Sugihara.”

YUKIKO: And the orders from the Ministry?

He walks back toward her and takes her hands in his. He looks into her eyes.

CHIUNE: I may have to disobey my government, but if I don’t, I will disobey my God.

YUKIKO: You’ll issue the visas to the Jews anyway?

CHIUNE: I’ll issue hundreds of visas. Thousands of visas, if necessary.

YUKIKO: They’ll fire you.

What type of conflict does this excerpt show?

character versus character
character versus society
character versus self
character versus nature

Question 7
Why is it correct to say that these two lines have the same meter?
because they both create a
picture in your mind of a person
traveling
because they are both sentences
that begin with the word I
Midway
by Naomi Long Madgett
I've come this far to freedom and I won't turn back
I'm climbing to the highway from my old dirt track
I'm coming and I'm going
And I'm stretching and I'm growing
And I'll reap what I've been sowing or my skin's not black.
I've prayed and slaved and waited and I've sung my song
You've bled me and you've starved me but I've still grown strong
You've lashed me and you've treed me
And you've everything but freed me
But in time you'll know you need me and it won't be long.
I've seen the daylight breaking high above the bough
I've found my destination and I've made my vow:
So whether you abhor me
Or deride me or ignore me
Mighty mountains loom before me and I won't stop now.
because they both end with the
sound "ack"
because they have the same
number of syllables and strong
beats

good lord look at him

What are some obstacles Reyna must overcome in order to be reunited with her mother?

What kind of poetry does nye write about

Who would most likely receive a business memo?
A. A friend
B. A coworker
C. A family member without e-mail
D. An enemy

_____ is defined as to lose or give up hope that things will improve.
Question 1 options:

a)

Colossal

b)

Despair

c)

Mock

d)

Pedestal

i need clarification ​

In a novel, a woman lives a lonely life in which she is
encouraged to marry a rich man to ensure her financial
security. Her brothers are merchants. The woman decides
to ignore her family's advice to marry and instead takes a
job on a train that travels through Europe, where she is
inspired by the landscapes and the people she meets to
write poetry. On the train, she meets a handsome stranger
and falls in love.
Which element of the story most clearly identifies it as an example of
Romantic literature?
A. The story's themes involve feminism.
B. The story's central conflict relates to money.
C. The story centers on love between two people.
O D. The story celebrates creative inspiration

Question 7 of 10
Which sentence best describes an aesthetic impact?
A. The twist ending of the story is meant to shock and disturb the
reader.
OB. The symbolism in the middle of the story represents the
character's longing.
OC. The height of the story's tension occurs in the final four
paragraphs of the story.
D. The wordiness of the story's introduction reflects the mind of the
main character.

PLEASE HELPPP!! WILL GIVE 10PTS AND BRAINLIST!!!

How does Florida make sure that childcare centers in the state are following regulations? Do you think this is fair?

I fell back,

Dazed, clutching my brow,

Groaning, “Oh my shin, oh my shin,”

And everybody peeled away from me

And dropped from laughter, and there we were,

All of us writhing on the ground for one reason

Or another.

—“How I Learned English,”
Gregory Djanikan

Why are the other boys laughing at the main character of the poem?

They think the main character getting hit by the ball is funny.
They think the main character looks funny holding his head.
They think it is funny that the main character tries to play baseball.
They think it is funny that the main character mistakes his head for his shin.

I will mark brainliest

Fill in the missing part of the analogy.
Purse : suitcase as cup.
A. thimble
O B. coaster
C. fork
O D. pitcher

Domesticated sheep were first brought to the United States by _____.

Columbus
Oñate
Coronado

Why does Tom make a plan to leave town quickly with Tyndale?
O A council might decide to arrest him.
O Tom gets an impatient letter from his uncle.
Tyndale is very sick.
Tom is afraid of Belsey.

please help 30 points will name brainiest

Q why did Mr Bumble regret decision of marrying Mrs Corney?Q why did Mr Bumble regret decision of marrying Mrs Corney in oliver twist

What was the authors purpose in writing "Island Morning" Jamaica Kincaid?

How many phonemes in night

What type of figurative language is "make merry myself?" *
alliteration
pun
onomatopoiea