Answer:
1. ask the writer what he or she thinks the story needs
2.any spelling or grammar mistakes you found
Explanation:
PART 1:- If you're having trouble coming up with suggestions for a peer's story, Then you need to "Tell the writer that you can't think of any suggestions"
PART 2:-You need to share with a peer after you review his or her story , about" what you liked about the story."
You should modify and edit your work in stage; you won't be able to catch everything all at once. You will be more likely to spot any flaws if you focus on a different part of structure each time you analyze your story.You can alter. You correct any grammatical, punctuation or sentence construction errors.To know more about peer's story, refer to the link:
https://brainly.com/question/19135353
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Which sentences should be included in a summary of “A Ride in the Night”?
Select Yes or No for each sentence.
Yes No
When a British soldier suggests that Will join the army and serve King George, the rest are amused.
Yes – When a British soldier suggests that Will join the army and serve King George, the rest are amused.
No – When a British soldier suggests that Will join the army and serve King George, the rest are amused.
Will and York are bringing six horses to an innkeeper whose son will deliver them to the Continental Army.
Yes – Will and York are bringing six horses to an innkeeper whose son will deliver them to the Continental Army.
No – Will and York are bringing six horses to an innkeeper whose son will deliver them to the Continental Army.
Will leaves York with the horses to check out the tavern, where he meets several British soldiers.
Yes – Will leaves York with the horses to check out the tavern, where he meets several British soldiers.
No – Will leaves York with the horses to check out the tavern, where he meets several British soldiers.
After the soldiers leave, Will tells Mr. Coleman he has the horses for Coleman's son to deliver.
Answer:
Will leaves York with the horses to check out the tavern, where he meets several British soldiers.
After the soldiers leave, Will tells Mr. Coleman he has the horses for Coleman's son to deliver.
Explanation:
It sounds the best and has more info!
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What would happen if kids were in charge? Write 5-6 sentences telling me what you think.
Answer:if kids were writing this they would say
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Answer:
Explanation:
I think if kids were in charge there would be a lot of things happening differently. Firstly, I think kids don't understand the different between fun and work and there woud be a lot of changes in school. There would be less homework and a lot more playtime. Also, there would be burgers and icecream for lunch everyday.
The arguments below seek to prove that the narrator is insane, Which of these arguments is untrue?
(this is for the story tell tale heart)
-The narrator was so driven to murder the old man because of his eye that he couldn't commit the murder as long as his eye was not visible.
-The narrator panicked as soon as the police arrived at his door, fearing that an arrest was imminent
-The narrator continued to hear the old man'a heartbeat, even after he murdered him and disassembled his body.
-The narrator enjoyed stalking the old man and was proud of the way he stalked, undetected.
Answer:
I think it may be D
Explanation:
Answer: its D
Explanation:
Which sentence best summarizes the main idea of the article?
A.
You can do an experiment with a baggie, cup, water, food color, and a marker.
B.
When the water in a cloud falls as precipitation, it may fall on land or water.
C.
In the water cycle, water evaporates, condenses, and falls as precipitation.
D.
Water is about 71% of Earth’s surface and needed by plants and animals.
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in "The Adventures of the Speckled band" what are some similarities and differences between the film vs the original story?
Answer:
it did not follow the same thing as the i book. there as no bear in the movie
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Part Two: Write two sentences for each of the word pairs. Correctly use each word in a sentence.
A. weather / whether
B. affect / effect
C. accept / except
Answer:
Weather - I’m surprised to see that the weather was becoming warmer.
Whether - Whether we want to admit it or not, we all wish everyone would like us.
Affect - An early frost in Florida can affect the orange crop negatively.
Effect - The effect of the medicine on her illness was surprisingly fast.
Accept - They offered him a job, & he accepted.
Except - Everything was in good order except the boots
Explanation:
Weather is primarily used as a noun. It is the state of the atmosphere in a particular place e.g., rain, sunshine, snow and so on. Whether is a conjunction. It is mostly used to introduce a clause and express a doubt or choice between alternatives.
Affect and effect are easy to mix up. Here's the short version of how to use affect vs. effect. Affect is usually a verb, and it means to impact or change. Effect is usually a noun, an effect is the result of a change.
Accept means to agree or to receive something offered. Except means excluding or with the exception of. The ex- of except can help you to remember that it means excluding.
WILL MARK BRAINLIST Think about a time when you were a member of a team. It could be a sports team, a school project team, a volunteer committee, or some other time you worked with a group to achieve a goal.
what would you do differently if you could go back in time? How would you be a better team member? What contributions would you make now that you were unwilling or unable to make then? What team role(s) would you fill?
(Be sure to provide reasons and examples to support your answer.)
Answer:
If I could go back in time and do something different to be a better team member, I would go back to my elementary baseball team. I would definitely try to do better by practicing my catching a lot more because I remember slipping on my grip. The team would laugh every time I slipped up, but I knew they got frustrated at me. I would definitely would have tried out for the pitcher instead of second base because I was better at throwing, but I was the best catcher in my class which was really saying something. And for example, if I had been a pitcher, we would have won more games, like when we played against the other school. My hand slipp and that cost the round, which got me benched. That’s what I’d do if I could go back in time and be a better team member.
Explanation:
or just don’t mess with time...
How does the quote “Even Dally has a breaking point” from the outsiders relate to teens?
Answer:Some teens/kids have rough times and need to let it out.
Explanation:
Define landlocked. What are some disadvantages to being a landlocked country? Are there any advantages?
Does geography determine development? Provide at least two examples to support your answer.
What may be some other factors besides economics that are affected by a civilization’s geography?
Answer:
The archeologists confirmed that the champions are situated close to the internment site of China's first ruler.
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Explanation:
(MC)The next question refers to the dialogue that follows. The paragraphs have been numbered to help you identify them more easily.
(1) Logan sighed as he sat on the couch. "I can't believe we're stuck at home on the Fourth of July!"
(2) "I blame Dad," said Kerry. "He should have driven us to see fireworks instead of taking Mom to a movie."
(3) "It's going to be pretty boring watching fireworks on television." said Logan.
(4) "Oh, I've got better plans than that," laughed Kerry. "I've got four firecrackers and two model rockets. Care to join me in the backyard?"
Which paragraph features dialogue that is incorrectly punctuated?
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
Paragraph 4
Paragraph 3 is the correct answer :)
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Why is freedom of the press an important freedom for a democracy to have?
Answer:
so everyone can get information from the press. This helps the people vote, get a better understanding of what is happening in the world, and it gives information to everyone
Explanation:
Answer:
It gives people access to information they need to make important decisions, such as voting.
Explanation:
Which of these aspects would be least useful in characterizing a villain as greedy?
A) They always grab the last slice of pizza
B) They always grab the last slice of pizza
C) They look down on charity
D) They are very wealthy
Answer:
D.
Explanation:
Greediness is when you don't like to share, and like to have everything to yourself. It's a selfish desire, when you only think of yourself and no one else. Not all people who are greedy are wealthy or rich, but some are of course, but stealing the last slice of pizza is unforgivable and should be a crime! Nothing can compare to someone stealing the last slice!
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Answer the following question with the best answer possible. Who is the protagonist? A. Alymer
B.Georgiana
C.Aminadab
D.none of the above
9th,10th graders, and etc
What is on the placement test?(hspt)
Answer:
Many private and parochial high schools require applicants to take the High School Placement Test, or HSPT test. ... It is a multiple choice exam, and it lasts two and a half hours. There are almost 300 questions, covering Verbal Skills, Math, Quantitative Skills, Language, and Reading.
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Rowena is terribly nervous about a class discussion scheduled for the next day. She would rather not participate, but her teacher has made it clear that he is expecting every student to make a meaningful contribution to the discussion. What is the best way for Rowena to be a good participant?
1Rowena should form her own agenda for the discussion and make sure to discuss it.
2Rowena should decide what about the topic is meaningful to her, and find a good time to speak up.
3Rowena should overcompensate for her nervousness by coming on aggressively.
4Rowena should listen to everyone else and only speak up when she absolutely agrees with them.
Answer:
2Rowena should decide what about the topic is meaningful to her, and find a good time to speak up.
Explanation:
Which phrase from the story "Po-No-Kah" provides textual evidence for the inference that settling the frontier required exceptional character?
1. "Here he had planted and gathered his crops year after year, and in spite of annoyances from the Indians, who robbed his fields..."
2. "And so they sailed along, following its graceful windings..."
3. "Bessie Hedden was a merry-hearted creature..."
4. "Bright and early the next morning, the children stood in the doorway, eagerly looking out for Tom."
Answer:
1. "Here he had planted and gathered his crops year after year, and in spite of annoyances from the Indians, who robbed his fields..."
Explanation:
I took the exam :)
how does the bears advise contribute to the theme of the story from the bear and two travelers
Answer:
The bear's advice was a lesson for every reader to learn. You shouldn't trust anyone at the risk of your life.
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identify the adverb in the sentence.
The twins go everywhere together.
A. go
B. twins
C. everywhere
D. together
Answer: Everywhere
Everywhere is an adverb for this sort of circumstance.
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Explanation:
Directions: Fill in the missing word with the vocabulary word that makes sense. Be sure to use the correct form of the word.
recite rigid torment adjusted mock devoted
1. Melissa slowly ________________________ to her new school.
2. I don’t like it when people ____________________ how I speak. It
makes me feel bad.
3. Sometimes when I have to speak in front of a large group of people, my legs become_______________________ and I feel like I will never be able to bend them again.
4. I like to __________________________ poems by Maya Angelou.
5. Jonathan is ____________________________ to his new baby sister.
6. Bullies think it’s fun to __________________________ other people, but I think it’s disgusting.
How is paragraph 2 structured in CGI Is the Future of Movies?
Paragraph 2: When the 1993 movie Jurassic Park was released, CGI was still an unproven technology. Many people weren’t sure it was worth the money. But audiences were amazed by the realistic dinosaurs “interacting” with human actors. Jurassic Park’s enormous success proved that CGI technology could look convincing and earn money. After seeing the dinosaurs, director George Lucas said, “It was like one of those moments in history . . . a major gap had been crossed and things were never going to be the same.” Film critic Tom Shone compared the invention of CGI to the use of sound in movies in 1927. CGI has allowed filmmakers to show Washington, DC, exploding in Independence Day, giant robots battling monsters in Pacific Rim, and an entire alien planet to come to life in Avatar. None of these effects would be convincing, or even possible, without CGI.
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Answer:
i think its d but im not sure
Explanation:
I need help it okay if you try your best
Bess raced across the gym floor. WHAP! She hit the shuttlecock over the net towards Pat’s far corner. Bess quickly returned to the center court so she was ready to run in any direction.
WHAP! Pat returned to the volley. Bess stepped sideways and tapped the shuttlecock gently. It popped over the net. Pat ran forward quickly. But it was too late. Pat fell under the net and slid across the floor to Bess’s side.
Is it likely that:
A. Bess and Pat are playing tennis
B. Pat returned the shuttlecock and is ready for the next hit
C. Bess thinks ahead to the next shot while she plays the game
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What is the resolution in "The Road Not Taken"? Your answer should be 2 to 3 sentences.
Answer:
The narrator sees that one path is overgrown and clearly not used very often. He thinks that this path is a better choice and decides to take the less desirable path. He chooses it because fewer other people have seen it or experienced it.
Explanation:
Argumentative Essay: The task is to take a stance, and to argue for true benefits of technology, or to argue against unrestrained technology usage. I’ve chosen to argue for the true benefits, but I’m stuck in the introduction. Could someone help me come up with a good hook (It can’t be a question)? If you’re copying it off the internet, please tell me so I can at least change it up a bit. Thanks!
Answer:
a good hook can be "technology is used everyday, in the long term we are saving, innovating, and much more
Explanation:
hook could grab readers attention
Which of the following is matter?
dust
the moon
a strand of hair
all of the above
HOW DO GEOLOGIST USE VOLCANOES TO LEARN ABOUT PLATE TECTONICS?
Answer: they have to do research first then go experiment
Explanation:
Answer:
they collect the lava
Explanation:
What is the meter in the following excerpt from “Jabberwocky” by Lewis Carroll?
'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe
Answer:
b
Explanation:
Answer: B. Trochiac Trimeter
Explanation:
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Write an explanatory paragraph using text-to-self connections that explains the version of prairie life you would want to live or the version you wouldn’t want to live. Edit your work, checking to see if your paragraphs flow smoothly, that you have used transition words effectively, checked your spelling, use of capital letters, and punctuation. Upload your final draft.
please make it sound like 6th grade work .,.
Answer:
There have been many times in my life when I wonder if I am actually living the kind of life I really want. Although I haven't answered to myself every single time, sometimes I have. Deep inside of me, I have seen the type of life I would like to have. I see myself living in the countryside far away from the city noise and the trivial daily routines. In this alternative reality, I live in a small house where there is a colorful garden. Regardless of how exhausting tasks in the countryside may be, I would definitely enjoy every single one. I see someone else living with me; a wonderful woman who would enjoy this life as much as me. Needless to say that there would be cattle to take care of and a dog for company. This is the life I would want to live.
Which sentence is an example of the use of figurative language?
A sudden breeze cooled our hot faces as we worked.
The breeze rustled the leaves of the tall elms.
The grain stalks bowed to one another in the breeze.
The wind chimes dinged and clanged in the breeze.