My brother needed some help on a test and wasn't sure what he needed to add or if he was missing something. Can you guys check this out for me as I don't know what he needs to add? He wrote: This story begins with a young man who has a problem: he wants to make money, but his family forbids him from working. Because the boy is 18 years old and must complete his education, his family will not allow him to work and earn money. This young man lives in a small row house in San Francisco, California, with his mother, father, and two sisters. He receives some financial support from his family, but it is insufficient to cover the cost of living in the city or pay his tuition. Jacob Hatcher is the name of this young man. To get a job: Jacob pleaded with his father to let him get a job, but his father was unreasonable and denied it. Unable to get permission, he went to his mother and tried to win her permission with facts and logic. "If I get a job, my father won't have to work as much, and we won't have any problems paying our rent," he said. His mother, too, was irrational and denied it. He turned to his friends for assistance when he ran out of ideas. To his friends, he said, "My parents are both unreasonable and refuse to let me get a job. I've done everything I could to persuade them. Have you got any suggestions? " They all agreed that he should persuade his sisters to persuade their parents because they were younger and more easily persuaded. To persuade them, he told them that if he got a job, he'd buy them candy and other treats if they asked. They were both skeptical, but they agreed to assist him anyway. They tried to persuade their parents to give him a job by saying things like, "I wish we could afford better toys." They were using short but clever sentences to persuade them, but it would still be weeks before they permitted him. To hasten the process, he told white lies, such as, "The grocery store owner said they were going to raise their prices on some of dad's favorite foods." None of this was true, of course, but it was effective in increasing his chances of getting permission. Both of their parents were intimidated by the gap in food budgets. The strategy was masterful. It worked. Jacob's parents had told him that he could only get a job if it was at his uncle's grocery store. After signing the paperwork, he had gotten a job. On the way to his first day at work, Jacob felt sick to his stomach. After walking slower than a snail and meeting his uncle, he immediately ran to the bathroom in pain, bumping into a customer in the process, knocking them down, and making them drop all of their items. Afterward, Jacob apologized immediately. His uncle wasn't amused, so he had to work for a week without pay to pay off what he had broken and pay back the customer for their sprained ankle. Jacob was certain that his uncle would fire him after what happened, but instead, he was congratulated for having kept working even though it was so hard for him. this is what he sent to me as a checklist

does your text include:

An exposition, rising action, complicating incident, climax, and a resolution.

Setting, plot, and theme.

Sensory details and rich description capture the reader's attention and develop a mood.

A narrator with a consistent point of view.

Dialogue to move the plot and show the characters’ ideas and feelings.

Consistent verb tense.

Appropriately selected and implemented active and/or passive voice

Correct capitalization, punctuation, and spelling.

Answer:

An exposition, rising action, complicating incident, climax, and a resolution.

Yes

Setting, plot, and theme.

Yes

Sensory details and rich description capture the reader's attention and develop a mood.

Yes

A narrator with a consistent point of view.

Yes

Dialogue to move the plot and show the characters’ ideas and feelings.

Yes

Consistent verb tense.

Yes

Appropriately selected and implemented active and/or passive voice

Yes

Correct capitalization, punctuation, and spelling

Yes

Which is the best example of a claim made in an argumentative essay?

Which of the following is true about second-person point of view? (5 points) Group of answer choices It uses the word I, and one character tells the story. It uses the word you and makes the reader feel a part of the story. The narrator is not part of the story and only states the characters' actions and speech. The narrator is not part of the story but knows what one character is thinking and feeling.

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Which transition best completes the paragraph? Some argue that opening a new factory will help the economy. argue that the pollution it causes isn't worth the benefit.
A. On the one hand
B. Therefore
C. In fact
D. However ​

Which word is the best ANTONYM of pious?

civil

vengeful

magistrate

blasphemous

In the context of the text, how should we think of ourselves in relation to the natural world?
Cite evidence from this text, your own experience, and other literature, art, or history in
your answer.

Read the lines from “The Village Blacksmith.”

You can hear his bellows blow;
You can hear him swing his heavy sledge,
With measured beat and slow,

How does the word choice affect the meaning of the poem?


It stresses how exhausted the blacksmith is by the end of the day.

It compares the sound of the blacksmith working to the sound of music playing.

It shows that the blacksmith must struggle to make a good living.

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Which work has the most suspense created by dramatic irony?
O A. A movie in which an awkward engineer goes over all the gadgets a
dashing spy might use
B. A short story about a time machine that allows a historian to visit
ancient Rome
C. A play about a plane that must make an emergency landing, after
which the passengers all become friends
D. A novel in which Abraham Lincoln goes to a theater, where the
reader knows he will be killed
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Which sentence is most clearly a thesis statement in an essay?
O A. In the end, the author's description of these three characters
teaches an important lesson.
B. As the evidence has shown, the three characters support the
novel's theme about change.
C. Through the three characters in the novel, the author shows the
dangers of refusing to change.
D. One character in the novel must decide between living a traditional
life and changing his ways.

are kay and peter able to provide Deming a better life than polly would have been able to provide him

Lan asked her friend what would he do if someone stepped on his foot.

A B C D

HEAL THE EARTH
“LIVE GREEN, LOVE GREEN, BE GREEN,
WE ARE JUST MANKIND.................
WITHOUT THE EARTH, WE ARE NOTHING.”
Compose a Poem Or
Dialogue writing about the topic

What does the quotation mean to you?

"When the wind of change blows, some build walls while others build windmills"

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How does the position of the krill in the aquatic food
web above differ from the other organisms?

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The word “fat” often carries a negative connotation. Write a story or observation where something fat is celebrated.
word count at least 125 words

Which sentence uses the underlined word correctly? His family will immigrate from Canada and settle in India. My mother emigrated from China and came to the United States. Yuri plans to immigrate from Russia later this year. I have always dreamed of leaving my homeland and emigrating to France.

write an intro of the essay " I have the skills needed to succeed in the VUCA world
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Write the second sentence so that it has the same meaning to the first one, using the words given.
1. I didn't go to school because I was sick. (so)
=> I was sick,
2. Hoa and Tim are both 13 years old. (the same……as)
=> Tim is
3. Her book is not the same as mine. (different from).
=> Her book is
4. I started playing soccer 5 years ago.
=> I have
5. The painting is bigger than the photograph. (not as……as)
=> The photo

Why does the poet say “so hack and chop this won’t alone do”?

What does the term "father" connote about Miles Davis in the reading passage above?

Kwanzaa is observed for 7 days and there is a different value for each day.
O True
O False

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Which is NOT a standard section of broadcast news?
A. opinion piece
B. local news
C. weather report
D. national news

Write the correct form of the verb to complete the sentence.We (deliver) _________________ your order early next week.

The last step before writing a compare-and-contrast essay is reviewing the two sources. Gathering supporting details. Creating an outline. Composing a thesis.

Which of the following needs a comma? (5 points) Question 13 options: 1) Clean up your area when you have finished. 2) Finishing includes cleaning up your work area. 3) When you have finished clean up your area. 4) Your area should be cleaned after you finish.