Read the sample again. Think about how you can change word choice and details to write for an older audience.

It’s more important than ever for young people to help keep our planet clean. Pollution is increasing, which can cause us to be sick. Hopefully, before you throw a bottle in the trash or garbage out the window, you stop and think about how it affects the planet. Try to recycle and pick up trash to keep the earth clean from litter. How else can you and your friends help the environment?

To write for an older audience, "young people" can be changed to
.

The words "us to be sick" can be changed to
.

What suggestion can be added that would be suitable for an older audience?



The last sentence can be changed to


.

Read The Sample Again. Think About How You Can Change Word Choice And Details To Write For An Older Audience.Its

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Answer 1

Answer:

For the first question, the answer is adolescent, juvenile, minor. The answer to the second question would be to be ill, to be sickly, to be unwell.  

Explanation:

you can always look up synonyms and et straight to the point when writing and add a little bit of explanation when writing a paragraph like this. overall amazing writing.

Answer 2

Answer:

To write for an older audience, "young people" can be changed to

✔ members of society

.

The words "us to be sick" can be changed to

✔ ”health concerns.”

.

What suggestion can be added that would be suitable for an older audience?

✔ Drive an energy-efficient car.

The last sentence can be changed to

✔ "Think about your children’s futures.”

.

Explanation:

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Writing Prompt(20pts) – This page can include any original writing of your choice. Must be school-appropriate!! Must be 1 page long!!

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Answer:

what is the question? Ask a question

Which line in the stanza is an example of verbal irony?
1 "For many thousand bodies here"
2 "'They say it was a shocking sight"
3 "Lay rotting in the sun;"
4 "After a famous victory."

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Answer:

4, After a famous victory

Explanation:


Verbal irony is when what is said is the opposite of the actual meaning, so I believe the answer is 3 (“Lay rotting in the sun”).

I need help writing a email to my basketball coach saying I quit the team because I am not doing great on my exams and being on the team just causes me unnecessary stress.

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Hey coach, I'm very sorry for the inconvenience but i would like to inform you that i'm quitting the team. School is just really stressful for me right now. Plus my grades aren't the best because of me not doing good on exams and the team is just adding more onto my load. I really loved playing for you guys but good things come to an end. I hope you understand coach. :)

Answer:

Dear, (coach's name)

I regret to inform you that I have decided to quit the team. I am working hard toward academic achievements and being on the team is distracting. I very thoroughly enjoyed partaking in the practices and/or games. Please understand that if I could I would stay on the team. Thank you for understanding, yn.

Explanation:

List 2 negatives to The Giver’s Society.

(book is giver)PLEASE HELP

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No freedom
Life is planned

PLS HURRY IM TIMED

Read the excerpt from Heart of a Samurai.

Everybody knew about the foreign devils—the barbarians. Did they really exist, Manjiro wondered, or were they just the inventions of adults to get children to behave? Even he had told his younger sisters, "Go to sleep—or the barbarians will come and get you!"


But now, in the dark of night, the wind screaming as he bailed bucket after bucket of freezing water out of the boat, images of monsters crowded his imagination. Fanged monsters with long, slashing tails, dagger-sharp horns, and icy blue eyes.

Which best states why the excerpt makes the reader want to keep reading?

to find out how many sisters Manjiro left behind in Japan
to find out if the barbarians really exist and show up in the story
to find out about other types of stories adults invent for children
to find out why the boat became filled up with freezing water

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Answer:

to find out if the barbarians really exist and show up in the story.

Explanation:

Well when it comes to fictional stories it is well know that you get a rush of adrenaline while reading especially in horror stories. It is something that is need so the story doesn't seem boring and tiresome.

What word/s in the following sentence/s should be said with expression in order to best convey mood and meaning? I could not believe that I failed the test. I studied so hard. a. could, believe c. test, hard b. not, so d. I, I Please select the best answer from the choices provided A B C D

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Answer:

Try could, believe

Explanation:

It sounds the strongest. if this doesn't work I'd recommend C.

i hope that this will help you ^^

Answer:

I also think its c so you should try it

Explanation:

If its wrong sorry but that´s what i think ;-;

PLS HURRY IM TIMED
This photograph shows the Statue of Liberty.

A green statue of a woman holding a book in one arm and her other arm fully raised while holding a torch. The statue is on a stone platform.

Which detail from "Lady Liberty" does this image support?

"It was designed so any stress was shifted to the steel supports inside – although the sea air did turn the copper surface to a soft green tarnish."
"It was shipped as 350 pieces in 214 crates – 31 tons of copper and 125 tons of steel."
"Inside, kerosene lamps were the only light. The air was stale, and it seemed like a place where accidents could happen."
"When we got there, the harbor was busy, and the island seemed a mess. The US Lighthouse Board was having some trouble with repairs."

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Answer:

"It was designed so any stress was shifted to the steel supports inside – although the sea air did turn the copper surface to a soft green tarnish."

Explanation:

I'm going to guess this because this picture description explicitly says that the statue is green. close reading lets gooo

please help, im really stuck

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Answer: This is a false equivalence

False is the answer

How does Callie’s Grandfather feel about the name “Calpurnia”?

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he thinks the name is modern
it’s the second one morden and flashy

Choose a phrase for each blank to correctly complete the sentence.

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Answer:

Explains there weakness

Explanation:

Starvation has noting to do with the size of the bowls.

Starvation is not a behavior.

Directions: Any effective argument makes points not only in support of its perspective, but also acknowledges opposing points (or counter-claims). Five of the statements below are claims from the passage, and five are counter-claims (opposed to the author's point of view). Write C for Claim or CC for Counter-claim for each statement in the space provided.
1. ________________ MP3 players are a constant distraction in the academic classroom. MP3 players are causing an increase in car accidents.
2. ________________ MP3 players can actually help a student focus, eliminating auditory distractions.
3. ________________ MP3 players can be useful in classes that require significant amounts of silent work: art or creative writing classes, for example.
4. ________________ MP3 players can cause a stagnation in the development of new music.
5. ________________ MP3 players can educate a person by providing lectures or other academic material.
6. ________________ MP3 players can even improve retention with music as a memory aid.
7. ________________ MP3 players can give a person a zone of peace and quiet in a
noisy cafeteria.
8. ________________ MP3 players create anti-social behavior preventing the development of the art of conversation.
9. ________________ MP3 players prevent walker or runners from hearing danger approaching.
10. ________________ MP3 players are causing an increase in car accidents.

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Answer:

1. C

2. CC

3. CC

4. C

5. CC

6. CC

7. CC

8. C

9. C

10. C

Answer:

1. C 2. CC 3. CC 4. C 5. CC 6. CC 7. CC 8. C 9. C 10. C

Explanation:

I hope this helps have a nice day

What is the complete subject in each sentence?

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I can’t see all of the picture. What are you asking?
can you show the whole picture?

Stella's happiness is ____

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Answer:

Exsquisite

Explanation:

I am not sure what you meant by the question, But i am giving you a word to fill in the blank

Hope this helped! Have a nice day!

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Her bed, food, social media

This photograph shows the Statue of Liberty.

A green statue of a woman holding a book in one arm and her other arm fully raised while holding a torch. The statue is on a stone platform.

Which detail from "Lady Liberty" does this image support?

"It was designed so any stress was shifted to the steel supports inside – although the sea air did turn the copper surface to a soft green tarnish."
"It was shipped as 350 pieces in 214 crates – 31 tons of copper and 125 tons of steel."
"Inside, kerosene lamps were the only light. The air was stale, and it seemed like a place where accidents could happen."
"When we got there, the harbor was busy, and the island seemed a mess. The US Lighthouse Board was having some trouble with repairs."

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Answer:

The image supports "It was designed so any stress was shifted to the steel supports inside – although the sea air did turn the copper surface to a soft green tarnish."

Explanation:

The image supports this because the image is showing what the Statue of Liberty looks like and the quotation from Lady Liberty above, shows the cause for the Statue of Liberty turning green and how the arm can be fully extended without having the risk of falling.

Review your written portrait of the lake from the previous section and complete the writing reflection rubric. has to be one paragraph

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Answer: I do not know what the answer is due to the lack of the portrait , I would love to help if you take a picture of the portrait so that way i can give a proper answer for you :)

Explanation:

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The second one because the question asks a sentence that gives a nostalgic or sentimental longing

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2. forge /fohrj/ verb
D1. to form by heating and hammering; beat into shape.
D2. to form or mark, especially by concentrated effort.
D3. to commit forgery.
D4. to work at a forge.
Which definition best matches the use of the word forged in paragraph 3?
A) Definition 1
B) Definition 2
C) Definition 3
D) Definition 4

3. timid /tim-id/ adjective
D1. lacking in self-assurance, courage, or bravery; easily alarmed; timorous; shy.
D2. characterized by or indicating fear.
D3. belief in time travel.
D4. to faint when meeting a man named Tim.
Which definition best matches the use of the word timid in paragraph 4?
A) Definition 1
B) Definition 2
C) Definition 3
D) Definition 4

4. exercise /ek-ser-sahyz/ noun
D1. something done or performed as a means of practice or training. verb
D2. to put (faculties, rights, etc.) into action, practice, or use.
D3. to use or display in one's action or procedure.
D4. to go through exercises; take bodily exercise.
Which definition best matches the use of the word exercise in paragraph 5?
A) Definition 1
B) Definition 2
C) Definition 3
D) Definition 4

5. sync /singk/ noun
D1. synchronization.
D2. Harmony or harmonious relationship. verb
D3. to occur simultaneously.
D4. to lose a member of your boy band.
Which definition best matches the use of the word sync in paragraph 13?
A) Definition 1
B) Definition 2
C) Definition 3
D) Definition 4

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Answer:

here

Explanation:

2. D1. to form by heating and hammering; beat into shape.

I can answer this one

3. D1. lacking in self-assurance, courage, or bravery; easily alarmed; timorous; shy.

can't answer that

4. D1. something done or performed as a means of practice or training.

can't

5. D2. harmony or harmonious relationship.

can't

35 POINTSSSSSS!!!!
Topic: Why someone should attend the Modern Olympic Games (Persuasive conclusion)
1 paragraph only 4-5 sentences

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I think you should attend the Modern Olympic Games because every two years the Olympics and its media exposure provide athletes with the chance to attain national and sometimes international fame. The Games also provide an opportunity for the host city and country to showcase themselves to the world.
Someone should attend the modern Olymoc Games because it is an enjoyable once in a lifetime experience. Attending these games is something truly rare and fun. You can watch your favorite sport. Plus its played by the best of the best! You get to watch HISTORY IN THE MAKING!

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Answer:by explaining how animals use overpasses

Explanation: because in the text it says how some animals use it to migrate, lay eggs, etc.

The predicate adjective functions as an adjective and is separated from the subject by a verb.
True False


29 points

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Answer:

True

Explanation:

Usually a linking verb.

I am turning green from the fish I ate.

The subject is I (a pronoun, but that's fine)

the verb is am turning

The adjective is green. Color is almost always an adjective -- except green which can be a lot of things, but in this case green is an adjective.

your answer would be true

Metaphor for grey streets

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Answer:

Sun bleached land

Old film

huh? lol what is this though, not clear :\

Why do objects tend to expand when they are heated?

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Answer:

Heat causes the molecules to move faster, (heat energy is converted to kinetic energy ) which means that the volume of a gas increases more than the volume of a solid or liquid.

Explanation:

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What does the following passage reveal about the Elvenking's character?

But the king, when he recevied the prayers of Bard, had pity, for he was the lord of a good and kindly people; so turning his march, which had at first been direct towards the Mountain, he hastened now down the river to the Long Lake...and great store of goods he sent ahead by water.

Question 3 options:

He was curious about whether the dragon was actually dead


He cares for other people other than his own


He wanted something in return


He was looking for the dwarves to capture them again

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Answer:

Explanation:

he cares for other people other than his own

Compare and contrast camera obscura with what you know about modern digital photography, including cell phones.

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How does the use of the camera obscura differ from contemporary photography? It captures images but does not preserve them.

Like the best things in life, the camera obscura is very simple. Light enters through a hole in the top of the camera and is focused on a screen on the bottom. But unlike a modern camera, the camera obscura does not create an image you can take away. You see the image by being inside the camera itself.

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Answer:

SAMPLE:

Name: Anita Barader

Date: 2/12/16

Controlling idea: Bees are useful for the planet.

Key ideas: Bees pollinate flowers and plants in your garden. They help produce 1/3 of our food supply. They help provide ½ of the world’s fibers, oils, medicines, and other raw materials.

Clincher: We want to protect bees from becoming extinct since bees are becoming endangered.

Answer: based on what u read u need to write the information the ask

Explanation: First write a claim the find two key details to support ur answers

Which sentence contains an example of verbal irony? (1 point)
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When I stepped outside, the cold air hit me like a ton of bricks—I quickly jumped back inside.

"I guess this is going to be a group effort," Han said, looking at the full sign-up sheet.

"Would you give me a hand moving these boxes upstairs?" Dad asked politely.

Seeing the untouched bowls of chili, the chef laughed. "One of my biggest hits!"

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Answer:

'Seeing the untouched bowls of chili, the chef laughed. "One of my biggest hits!"'

Hope this helps!

The sentence that contains a verbal irony is:

D. Seeing the untouched bowls of chili, the chef laughed. "One of my biggest hits!

Verbal irony

This is a when what is said is opposite from the literal meaning. Here a speaker says something and means another thing.

In the sentence, the man's expressions showed that he didn't succeed in hitting any if the bowls, but he went ahead to exclaim, "One of my biggest hits"

Therefore, the correct answer is option D.

Read more about verbal irony here:

https://brainly.com/question/1551288

How does the Giver explain the strange visions Jonas has? (p. 119) the giver

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The Giver told Jonas that the things he saw were because Jonas was able to recognize color before everything else was the same.
It showed that Jonas, like the Giver, was different from the rest of the people in the community because they can see into the future because of the passing of memories.
Because he is crazy the old man thinks he doesn’t take pills

Which use of media in a speech is most appropriate for an audience of high
school students?
A. A quote from an expert about why bullying on social media can
cause long-term problems
B. An image of a teenager looking at her phone with an upset
expression on her face
C. A line graph showing the number of bullying complaints reported
each year within the state
D. A cartoon image of an upset child sitting alone on a playground
while other students play nearby

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Answer:

I would go for b An image of a teenager looking at her phone with an upset expression on her face

Explanation:

I've seen a girl like this sitting on the bench one time, and teachers started to help her, and now she isn't sad like before so i would go with that one if i were you

Probably go for B. High students will probably understand other’s emotions better then say a speech so B would get the message across.

(first stanza) The word rage can mean “anger,” but it can also mean “passion”—an outpouring of feeling. How might Thomas have been using both meanings in the poem?

Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Though wise men at their end know dark is right,
Because their words had forked no lightning they
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright
Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight,
And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way,
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight
Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light,

And you, my father, there on the sad height,
Curse, bless me now with your fierce tears, I pray.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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Answer:

He might mean in a very passionate way but with some rage.

Or:

In the second stanza he talks about rage and passion, I think that he maybe tried to say that he hates someone or something rages him with a passion, that he like that this thing rages him.

Look at page 1 (not the brochure cover but the page with a 1 at the bottom). What does
the brochure do convince parents that second-hand smoke is a problem they should
know about?

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Answer: I do not know because their is no picture to help me determine what the answer is .

Explanation:

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