Read the sentence below. How would you correctly fix the run-on sentences?
Derek wanted a ferocious pit bull terrier to scare off burglars but his apartment
complex did not allow dogs as a result, Derek had to settle for naming his goldfish Mr.
Jaws and installing additional door locks.

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Answer 1

Answer:

I would put periods between the sentences and connect certain chunks of the sentences adding transition words like "additionally", "next", "lastly", etc.

Explanation:

Derek wanted a ferocious pit bull terrier to scare off burglars. As a result, his apartment complex did not allow dogs and had to settle for additional door locks to keep his place secure. Additionally, Derek kept his pet goldfish, Mr. Jaws to definitely keep his surroundings safe :)

Not sure if the gold fish is necessary and I don't have a lot of context but hope this helped i guess.


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HELP ME OUT PLEASE!

Read the last line of "Early Fires again:

If the flame burned out, a new flame would have to be secured, which often meant a long journey and a great deal of trouble.

Which answer best paraphrases the last line?

A) If the fire went out, a new one would have to be obtained, which was not an easy task.

B) Sometimes a new flame would have to be found, which meant a long trip and a great deal of trouble,

C) After a long journey, it was hard to get a new flame.

D) After the flame burned out, it was hard to relight it.​

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A is the answer I think

Answer:

the answer is A

Explanation:

i got it correct on the test

Select all the correct answer’s that apply pls!

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Answer:

2 and 4 i think!!

Explanation:

My enlish teacher taught me this like 3 days ago LOL!

Answer:

2 and 4 is the answer.

Explanation:

what message does the story of noah bring to us in terms of doctrine morals and worship? ​

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Answer:

Noah set himself apart by being faithful to God and not giving into sins. The task of building an ark that could house the wide variety of animals Noah had to save was not going to be easy. God needed someone who was faithful enough to get through the hard times when things weren't necessarily clear

Explanation:

3. He is not a great writer. He is very popular. (Change into a complex sentence.)​

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Answer:

He is popular but he cannot be considered as a great writer.

Explanation:

He is not a magnificent writer. He is very beloved.

identify the underlined phrase as positional phrace, noun phrase, verbal phrase, or infinitive phrase. write PP prepositional phrase, NP for noun phrase,
VP for verbal phrase, and IP infinitive paste


1. The speed boat is (moving_in_a_circle)

2. Danielle has (a_colorful_bag) with her.

3. i am making this project (for_the_entire_class).

4. mr peter parker plan (to_have_watched) the new movie

please answer this correctly ineed it now

5. john ronnie laughed (in_class)​

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       A lot of times, we can ask ourselves different questions to help us figure out what type of phrase is being asked.

1. The speed boat is moving in a circle.

       [] VP - This is a verbal phrase because it shows movement. Where is the speedboat moving? In a circle.

2. Danielle has a colorful bag with her.

       [] NP - This is a noun phrase. What does Danielle have? A colorful bag.

3. I am making this project for the entire class.

       [] NP - This is a noun phrase. Who is it for? It is for the entire class.  

4. Mr peter parker plan to have watched the new movie

       [] IP - This is an infinitive phrase. An infinitive is the "basic" form of a verb. To swim, to run, to sing, etc.  

5. John Ronnie laughed in class

       [] PP - This is a prepositional phrase. Where did John Ronnie laugh? In class.

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If you could have any superpower what would it be and why? ​

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Flying. Because not only is it more environmentally friendly, but it would also be fun as heck. You could go anywhere you want and not have to worry about time, gas, traffic, etc;.

Explanation:

invisible because I could go anywhere in the country

I will mark brainlist please help

1. Identify the type of the underlined complement in the following sentence.

Through his own efforts he had become our (captain).

Predicate adjective

Predicate nominative

Direct object

indirect object

Object complement


2. Identify the part of speech of the underlined word in the sentence.

By cutting down those trees, you endanger (not only) the spotted owl (but also) the land itself.

interjection

coordinating conjunction

correlative conjunction

subordinating conjunction


3. Identify the complete subject in the following sentence.

All the stars will appear in the spring festival.

All

All the stars

the stars

in the spring festival


4. Identify the part of speech of the underlined word in the sentence.

The sun went (down) behind the hill.

interjection

conjunction

adverb

preposition


5. Identify the type of the underlined verb.

Following in the family tradition, Elizabeth (became) a pharmacist.

action verb

linking verb

transitive verb

intransitive verb


6. Identify the simple subject in the following sentence.

The habitats of plants and animals are often destroyed by deforestation.

plants

animals


The habitats


habitats


7. Choose the antecedent of the underlined pronoun in the following sentence.

Both of the actors gave superior performances. They captured the hearts of (their) audience.

actors

performances

hearts

audience


8. Identify the complete subject in the following sentence.

About two miles down the road is a modern hotel.

About two miles down the road

two miles down the road

a modern hotel

hotel


9. Identify the part of speech of the underlined word in the sentence.

The destructive flood stopped (there).


pronoun


adverb


adjective


noun

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Answer:

1. Direct object

2. Correlative conjunction

3. All the stars

4. Preposition

5. Linking verb

6. Habitats

7. Actors

8. two miles down the road

9. Adverb

Explanation:

#followformore

Hope this helps :)

It is good that both parents in a family join the workforce. What are the advantages?​

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Explanation:

With both parents working, a high-quality lifestyle is more affordable for most of the households. This is a primary benefit when both parents are working. Thus, there is more money in hand for the parents to spend on their children for their education and other needs.

Which of the following sentences
punctuates the appositive or
appositive phrase correctly?
A. Shannon, my sister,
owns a healthy living
company that allows people to exercise while at
work.
B. Shannon, my sister owns a healthy, living
company that allows people to exercise while at
work.
C. Shannon, my sister owns a healthy living
-company, that allows people to exercise while at
work.
D. Shannon my sister owns a healthy living,
company that allows, people to exercise while at
work.

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Answer:

C. Shannon, my sister owns a healthy living -company, that allows people to exercise while at work.

V. Use a comma plus a coordinating conjunction to join the sentences in each cluster.
Ex: a. He hung the picture.
b. The wire was too thin. [, but]
c. It fell off the wall. [, and]
→ He hung the picture, but the wire was too thin, and it fell off the wall.
1. a. Manny skated on the pond.
b. Sandy went sledding on the hill. [, and]
2. a. You can taste-test the dessert yourself.
b. You can ask me to test it for you. [, or]
3. a. He answered the letter late.
b. He had the flu. [, for]
4. a. We watched the news on television.
b. We did not see the weather report. [, but]
5. a. The neighbors are on vacation.
b. Perhaps they are not answering their door. [, or]
6. a. Allison completed her report on Monday.
b. She practiced her presentation on Tuesday. [, and]
7. a. Harry trained for the race.
b. He was a sure winner. [, and]
c. He twisted his ankle the weekend before the event. [, but]
8. a. Grandpa pitched the ball to me.
b. I hit a home run. [, and]
9. a. The tree grew tall.
b. She pruned its leaves.
c. It produced no apples.
10. a. Her jewelry must be real.
b. It must be expensive.
c. It shines brilliantly.
11. a. They went to hear the concert.
b. They took some friends along. [, and]
12. a. She could go over to her friend’s house.
b. She could talk to her on the phone. [, or]
13. a. He especially liked peppers on his pizza.
b. His friends wanted olives. [, but]
14. a. We know Kelly arrived early.
b. We saw her in the cafeteria. [, for]
15. a. The math problem was not solved by me.
b. It was [not] solved by anyone. [, nor]
16. a. She could borrow her friend’s blouse.
b. She could try to mend her own. [, or]
17. a. The frozen yogurt was good.
b. The toppings were delicious. [, and]
c. The cone was soggy. [, but]
18. a. Henry shoveled five driveways to earn money.
b. He still didn’t have enough to buy the disc player.
19. a. The play was interesting.
b. The actors were his friends.

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Answer:

C) COMPLETE THE SENTENCES WITHOUT CHANGING THE MEANING:

1.- I bought this digital camera because the shop assistant recommended it.

2.- In order to be home by midnight, we should leave the party at 11.30.

3.- Jason didn't go on the trip because he was ill.

4.- Because she practises every day, Emma is an excellent guitar player.

5.- They wanted to go to the shopping

Fat rats scurry

phrase or a sentence?

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phrase  

Explanation: that's in my opinion

Answer:

A sentence

Explanation:

It needs a subject and a verb. Scurry is a verb and rats is the subject.

what is the defference between in the end & at the end​

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Explanation:

Simply we put, at the end refers to a specific time or location, whilst in the end is an idiomatic phrase that means in conclusion or in summary.

she hid the cookies ___ the cupboard​

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Answer:

she hid the cookies in the cupboard

Answer:

in

Explanation:

I seriously need help with these two I really don’t want any links?

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Answer:

1.Simile

2. When he's standing in the jungle

Explanation:

Answer:

* simile

* the moments after he first sees the Tyrannosaurus rex

Explanation:

1) Have you finished all the reports ......? You never let me down, Sama!
a) already
b) recently
c) so far
d) yet

2) What ....... when I called you? You sounded very busy.
a) have you been doing
b) have you done
c) did you do
d) were you doing

3) l ............ stories very quickly, but I no longer do now.
a) have written
b) used to write
c) am writing
d) write

4) I returned home when Mother ......... dinner
a) was preparing
b) was been prepared
c) were repairing
d) had been prepared

5) Manal cannot play tennis because she .......... her hand.
a) have hurt
b) has hurt
c) had hurt
d) was hurting

6) We............. three visits from our relatives this week. We expect more visits .
a) have had
b) had had
c) didn't have
d) have

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Answer:

1. A2. D3. B4. A5. C6. D

Explanation:

#FOLLOWFORMORE

Answer:

1. A

2. D

3. B

4. A

5. C

6. D

Explanation:

Hope this helps :)

horses race

phrase or a sentence?

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Answer:

phrase

Explanation:

there is no punctuation

Answer:

phrase.

Explanation:

a sentence would be "im going to a horses race but this is one thing so its a prase

On Ralph Ellison’s Living With Music (1955)
In the passage, the drunk, the jazz musicians, and the singer all share which of the following?
Select one:
a. An inability to identify with others
b. An intense application to a single activity
c. A concern more with individuality than with tradition
d. An ambivalent feeling about their roles in life
e. A desire for popular approval

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Answer:

b. An intense application to a single activity

What poetic devices are being used in the excerpt above and what imagery does it provide?
A) The poet uses personification to create an image of the horse riding up to the inn.
B) The poet uses alliteration and onomatopoeia to help the reader "hear" the sounds of the horse's hooves in the inn yard.
C) The poet uses a simile to give a visual of the brightness of the moon
D) The poet uses hyperbole to demonstrate the darkness of the yard.

Please help me

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Answer:

The answer is A.......................

does form and shape is same word.

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Approximately the same.

Explanation:

In large part, there are both approximately the same. Form is usually a little bit more precise than shape though. As an example, "He is roundish in shape, but has an otherwise refined form

help please!! this is from the book freak the mighty.
What does Kevin do when Max can't answer the teacher's questions?
1. He interrupts Max and answers the question wrong on purpose
2. He climbs up on Max's shoulders
3. He tells Max it's time to leave and they do
4. Nothing, he lets Max figure it out

thank you :)

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Answer:

The answer is 2 and/or B

Explanation:

I took the quiz

What theory was Muzafer Sherif testing in his experiment?
A. People will try to persuade others to accept a different point of view.
B. People will change their opinions to agree with others, even strangers.
C. People will change their opinions when their close acquaintances disagree.
D. People will always stand by their opinions when strangers disagree with them.

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Answer:

People will change their opinions to agree with others, even strangers. B

How do the citizens help to increase national glory?

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Answer:

think each of us should stop complaining and start doing something for the nation. think each of us should stop complaining and start doing something for the nation. Let your hands speak.

Explanation:

pls mark brainleast and follow me

Select the letter of the correct answer.
Which of these would be least important to include in a summary of this article?
A. La La Land Kind Cafe serves coffee to its communities in bright yellow cups.
B. The cafes aim to model how a successful business can have a positive effect on a
community.
C. The cafes are intended to spread kindness through the communities they serve.
D. La La Land Kind Cafe provides a community for youth who have aged out of foster
care.

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Answer:

la la land kind cafe provides a community for Youth who hav aged Out of foster care.

Answer: A

Explanation: There would be no point to include A in a summary

Which answer option BEST evaluates how well the following summary reflects the original passage?

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Answer:

D

Explanation:

Even thought  it is a short anwer, it does explain all the text above.

which is a scientific question that could be included in this investagation

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Explanation:

how am i suposed to answer this

6. Which of the following sentences from the reading best expresses the
central point of the selection?
A. "Dr. Rosenthal is a pioneer in the study of how people send
and receive non-verbal messages...called 'body language."
B. "Every would-be Romeo or Juliet knows that the language
of courtship goes far beyond words."
C. "Researchers trace various kinds of body language back to
our roots in the animal world."
D. "Because nonverbal communication, based in our animal
roots and childhoods, is universal, it is useful to become more
aware of it."

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Answer:

what was the central point of the selection

Explanation:

lol i got points

Mrs. Mallard is described as descending the stairs "like a goddess of Victory." In what ways does she feel herself victorious? in The Story of an hour​

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Answer: Mrs. Mallard feels victorious because she is released from the life she felt trapped in. She no longer must suffer the misery and unhappiness of living with Mr. Mallard, nor will she ever have to endure such a marriage again.

She has been set free by her husband's death - something that at first would seem wholly negative but in reality provides her with relief and happiness that she had never known when he was alive.

To what major search engine has Teevan contributed?

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Answer:

Microsoft

Explanation:

why do farmers have to things differently than in the past

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Answer:

cause they didnt have the tools we have today

Answer:

There is different technology nowadays than there was in the past, the new technology makes it easier to farm. A good example is having weather forecast. Having a forecast available can tell the farmer if there will be bad storm giving them time to get the animals in a safe place.  

Explanation:

I hope this helps! :D

in president Mandela speech he mentioned that a team was unable to participate how was their disappointment and nobody Mandela and what larger point that he made from this about South Africa's future provided explain from the text to support your answer.

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Answer:

Nelson Mandela showed what is possible for our world and within each one of us — if we believe, dream and work together

Explanation:

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