Which is the best peer review of the paragraph below? Another example of how Frankenstein's passion led to death is Elizabeth's death. The monster that Frankenstein created in his passion for science murdered the woman for whom he had great passion. In this case, two of Frankenstein's passions, one intellectual and one amorous, combined to result in Elizabeth's death. A. This is pretty short. You should add more. B. Your sentence variety is not very good in this paragraph. Reword the second sentence so it doesn't start with the subject. C. The argument is good, but you need to add textual evidence of the two passions to back it up.

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Answer 1

Answer:

It IS C

Explanation:

I just re did this assignment on Plato.

Also here are some extra answers for the other questions in the assignment.

Which is NOT an example of textual evidence?

A.  

quotes from the text

B.  

paraphrasing from the text

 C.  

themes from the text ---------- This is Right

D.  

none of the above

And

Select the correct answer.

What is the final thing a good peer reviewer should do?

 A.  

read for spelling and grammar errors

 B.  

summarize problems and suggestions--------- This is right

 C.  

note the good things about the essay

 D.  

check the validity of the thesis statement


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How does the author's initial introduction of Harriet help to develop Emma's character?

A
The emphasis on Harriet's education at Mrs. Goddard's school suggests that Emma is seeking a companion who is her intellectual equal.

B
The focus on Harriet's unknown family origins suggests that Emma feels pity for those who have had a less fortunate upbringing.

C
The focus on Harriet's blue eyes and fair hair suggests that Emma may be prone to jealousy of other girls' attractive qualities.

D
The emphasis on Harriet's physical charms suggests that Emma may be overly impressed by superficial qualities.

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I think it’s d I’m not sure

Answer: D

Explanation:

After Brandon and Ghost fight Ghost feels like he has been treated unfairly. After a scenario of unjust consequences, how might someone with a growth mindset progress moving forward from this situation.

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Answer:

They would say their sorry to eachother and become friends.

Explanation:

Friends often fight then get back together. Have a great day!

The Outsiders takes place in the late 1960s, if this story was playing out in modern (non-
pandemic times), how would the story change? What are some things that would have to be
adjusted? Explain in 4 or more sentences.

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Answer:

Explanation:

Some things that would change would be certain scenes such as the the drive in scene, there wouldn't be as many people there, as well as sitting close together. Some other things that would be adjusted would be smoking in buildings or hospitals smoking isn't as socially acceptable as it was in the 60s. Some other minor details include the gas station scene when soda pop was filling up gas, that isn't a custom anymore. Lastly the obvious one they would all be wearing masks which I believe would have changed the course of the movie due to the fact smoking is a part of the characters appearance.

Which theme best fits "Porphyria's Lover"? * A: It's better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all. B: If someone doesn't cooperate, make them. C: Always be cautious; shocking and unexpected behavior is a part of life. D: Don't lose your head.

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Answer:

A). It's better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all.

Explanation:

The theme that would most adequately fit Robert Browning's popular poem 'Porphyria's lover' would be that 'it's good to have loved and lost instead of never being loved at all.' This theme is clearly reflected through the insane act of Porphyria's lover who strangles his own beloved fearing that she might not love him the same way the next day or for her entire life. In order to grasp that loveful moment forever and to overcome the fear of losing her ever, he strangles her himself. This reflects that he wanted to be united with his beloved Porphyria's love even for that moment rather than living the entire life with the fear that she might not love him similarly. Thus, option A is the correct answer.

Read this sentence from paragraph 9.
Mostly he drew during the free minutes of his day, when he could empty his mind and just trust his charcoal pencil. Based on this sentence, the reader can conclude that andy-


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Based on this sentence, the reader can conclude that Andy-

C. Puts very little thought into his designs.

What can we infer about Andy from the passage?

From this passage provided, we can infer that Andy drew during the times of the day when he was free and at these times, he did not put a lot of thought into the designs that he made. This is seen in the fact that he trusted his charcoal pencil to do the designs. A person who was mentally involved in his work will not leave all of the thinking to his pencil.

Instead of relying on brain power or his creative mind, he rather pushed the task of drawing to his charcoal pencil which did the bulk of the work. A conclusion is based on distinct evidence and the facts described about Andy in this passage show that he put very little thought into his designs.

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Present simple:

1. I listen to music every day.

2. You watch TV at night.

3. He never uses the cellphone in class.

4. She sometimes plays volleyball.

5. It usually rains in summer.

6. We always wear the school uniform.

7. You visit the museum once a month.

8. They read a new book every week.

9. Emma always does the homework at 3 o'clock.

10. Edward usually has lunch at school.

11. My friend sometimes rides a bike in the park

Present continuous:

1. I am listening to music now.

2. You are watching TV right now.

3. He is using the cellphone in class at this moment.

4. She is playing volleyball at the moment.

5. It is raining now.

6. We are wearing the school uniform right now.

7. You are visiting the museum at the moment.

8. They are reading a new book in this moment.

9. Emma is doing the homework now.

10. Edward is having lunch at the school right now.

11. My friend is riding a bike in the park at the moment.

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What is most likely the writer's purpose?
O to emphasize the tension between Bilbo and his
relatives
Angelica Baggins had considered not attending the
party, but curiosity got the better of her. When she
arrived, Bilbo himself presented her with a gift, an
intricate gold bracelet. Angelica nodded haughtily at
Bilbo and strolled into the party without so much as a
"thank you." While the other hobbits praised Bilbo's
lavish gifts, Angelica seethed inwardly. The bracelet
was insignificant when compared with the inheritance
that Bilbo planned to bestow on Frodo. Angelica
deserved more-much more.
O to reveal more about Frodo's relationship with Bilbo
O to convey the message that generosity strengthens
relationships
O to create an upbeat and celebratory mood

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Answer:

A is the right answer.

Explanation:

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The purpose of the writer is to emphasize the tension between Bilbo and his relatives. The correct option is A.

What is The fellowship of the ring?

The fellowship of the ring: The Lord of the Rings is starts when Mr. Bilbo Baggins announced his birthday party.

Bilbo was rich and very particular and had been the admiration of the shire for sixty years.

Thus, the correct option is A.

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What two words dose robonaut come from​

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Answer:

It comes from "Robot and Astronaut"

Answer:

robonaut is a class of robot with human characteristics conducted by the Dexterous Robotics Laboratory at NASA's Lyndon B. Johnson Space Center in Houston in Texas

what are the two main disadvantages of the means of transport used today? ​

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Answer: Polluting the air. And gas leaks in cars.

Explanation: The gas that comes out of cars had deadly chemicals that are not good for the environment. To me gas leak's are the worst because it just settles into the ground until what do you know the whole surrounding area is on fire.

Adding 's or s' to the word book changes it into a(n) ______.

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Answer:

It changes it to a " sBooks"

Explanation:

Actually it can be books' or book's

bc books' is talking about multiple books and book's is talking about one :0

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Why does King bring up examples of violence in the United States at the beginning of his speech?
oA.To explain why he doesn't deserve the award.
oB.To ask the audience why violence is still happening.
oC.To give examples of events that no longer happen.
oD.To show that the struggle for freedom is not over.

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Answer:

is this a comprehensive question? if it is, I recommend you to check the passage. If it is not, option D could be selected.

Can someone please help me with this :)

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Answer:

Bustling

Explanation:

Bustling = busy

Which is the best clue that "Quiet Fighter is NOT a work of historical fiction?
A.the fact that the narrator's mother has died only recently
B.references to Internet technology developed within the last twenty years
C.the detail about the narrator's brother working at a school in Vietnam
D.the narrator's father listening to George Strait songs

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Answer:

B. References to the internet technology within the last 20 years.

Explanation:

i had put A, and got it wrong, and the answer ended up being B

References to Internet technology developed within the last twenty years is NOT a work of historical fiction.

What is historical fiction?

Historical fiction exists as a literary genre in which the plot takes place in a setting connected to past events, but is fictional.

Historical fiction exists as a literary genre where the story brings place in the past. Historical novels apprehend the details of the period as accurately as possible for realism, including social norms, manners, customs, and traditions.

One of the most prosperous writers of historical novels is Hilary Mantel. Other writers of historical fiction contain Philippa Gregory, Bernard Cornwell, Sarah Waters, Ken Follett, George Saunders, Shirley Hazzard, and Julie Orringer.

Hence, references to Internet technology developed within the last twenty years are NOT a work of historical fiction.

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9. Identify the sentence below that is most likely to be the student's thesis
statement.
Through education, regulations, and equipment, high school sports can continue
to be a source of entertainment, not danger.
The question then becomes: what is being done to prevent these injuries?
Critics would argue that most sports are highly dangerous to those teens who
participate in them.
Any sport that involves contact (basketball, hockey, lacrosse) can leave its
players vulnerable to injury.

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Answer:

Any sport that involves contact (basketball, hockey, lacrosse) can leave its players vulnerable to injury.

Explanation:

can someone help me ASAP or now?

I need help to synthesize about what the benfits about poverty(ITS FOR SCHOOL)

and its still class time I only have 3 minutes to answer!!!!!

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Answer:

Explanation:

G

brainliest and 23 points
write a story about a girl and a robot
including some of the things in the narrative checklist
i’m going to report links

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Answer:

It was Christmas, and as usual, my dad was working in the basement. He is a scientist and has his laboratory down there. For the last few months, he did not let me go in there. I don't know why since I always go there and help him.

My dad is my best friend, I don't have any friends at school, and I get bored easily, so I enjoy spending time with him. He always has the craziest ideas. Maybe now he is working on a crazy one, and he doesn't want me to see it.

As the evening came, my mom called my dad for dinner. She and my sister Susan have been working on it all day, and it looked delicious. After we ate, we opened our presents. I must say that mine was in a big red box. I had no idea of what it could be. As I opened it, I remember the excitement on my father's face. I could not believe what it was, a robot!.

As I turned it on, it said -hi Carol, my name is Sunny, and I am your new best friend- then it looked at my father and said -oh, hello creator, you look good-

I played with Sunny till I went to sleep. The next day, I went with Sunny to play outside, when some of my classmates passed by my house and saw Sunny and me. They started to laugh and make fun of me. They called me the crazy girl and her crazy golden can.

As the days passed, they continued to make fun of me and my precious robot. I ignored them and kept playing with Sunny.

One day, all the kids were playing basketball in the park when one of them fell to the ground and scraped his knee very badly. He started to cry, and Sunny approached him. Form its chest, it took a first aid kit and started to clean his knee. After that, Sunny gave him a lollipop.

The kid, who has always made fun of me, stopped his crying and said - Guys Carol, and her friend are very cool! I want them on my team!-

From that day on, I have lots of friends, but my best one is Sunny, thanks to it, I have lots of friends and fun. Sunny was my dad's best creation.

Explanation:

In this story, the elements that we can find are:

Carol's point of view.The characters. They are mainly Carol, her father, and her classmates.The setting. It is when we introduce Carol and how her life is.The begging of the story. It is in the first paragraphs when Carol opens her present and then plays with it.The conflict. It is Carol not having friends and the children making fun of her.The resolution. It is when Sunny helps the injured kid, and he tells that Carol is cool.

Can I get a answer for this ​

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Answer:

b since throught the time new layer is covering the older one

Explanation:

Drag each tile to the correct box.
Determine which type of transitional expression each sentence uses.
time
clarification
contrast
example
Simultaneously, Monique got started on the graphs
and David worked on the content.
For instance, analysts must work on data for weeks
before they even begin to reach conclusions.
On the other hand, the internet has made access to
information much easier and faster than it was before.
Generally, turtles sleep at night, even during severe
weather conditions.

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Answer:

Explanation:

Clarification-Monique got started on the graphs and David worked on the content.

Example- For instance, analysts must work on data for weeks before they even begin to reach conclusions.

Contrast-On the other hand, the internet has made access to information much easier and faster than it was before.

Time- Generally, turtles sleep at night, even during severe weather conditions.

Answer:

Simultaneously, Monique got started on the graphs

and David worked on the content. - TIME

For instance, analysts must work on data for weeks

before they even begin to reach conclusions. - EXAMPLE

On the other hand, the internet has made access to

information much easier and faster than it was before. - CONTRAST

Generally, turtles sleep at night, even during severe

weather conditions. - CLARIFICATION

Explanation:

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In the early months of the Civil War, a small group of Union troops unsuccessfully attacked the Confederates. One
month later, President Lincoln made a decision. He decided that it was time to stage a major offensive. The First
Battle of Bull Run (called the Battle of Manassas in the South) was the first major land battle of the Civil War.
Brigadier General Irvin McDowell was chosen to lead the charge. At first, McDowell protested. He said that his
soldiers were too inexperienced. Lincoln reminded him that the Confederates were also inexperienced.

lincoln tried to _____ McDowell.

A:praise
B:reassure
C:ignore
D:capture

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the answer is d capture

Colin created a presentation about baseball which included photos and video of skating rinks, basketball courts, baseball diamonds, and tennis courts. "I wanted to show that baseball is an important sport," said Colin. Did he make a good choice?

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Answer:No he didn't because his report was on baseball, and he showed pictures of other sports which had nothing to do with his topic. He probably confused his readers because of this, And if he wanted to to show how important baseball was he should have showed pictures of baseball not other sports.

Based on the information provided, it seems like Colin did not make a good choice because the photos and videos he included in his presentation do not relate specifically to baseball.

What is presentation?

Presentation is the act of delivering information or ideas to an audience. It involves using various techniques such as speaking, using visual aids, and demonstrating to communicate a message effectively.

The primary goal of a presentation is to inform the audience to take action or make a decision based on the information presented.

In the above case, it seems like Colin did not make a good choice because the presentation Included images and videos of skating rinks, basketball courts, and tennis courts may confuse the audience from the main topic, which is baseball.

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Which detail from the text best supports the answer to part a how many typical team did something not so typical to help street kids

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The question is incomplete and the full version can be found online.  

Answer:

PART A:

A.Okina’s determination has resulted in many street kids in Nigeria being able to attend school.

PART B

C.“To raise money, he wrote to local charities and visiting charitable individuals so he could get the funds to pay school tuition for more street kids.” (Paragraph 21)

Explanation:

The main idea of "How A Typical Teen Did Something Not So Typical to Help Street Kids" (2017), by Linus Unah, is that James Okina´s effort and determination helped many street kids in Nigeria to be able to attend school. This becomes clear in paragraph 21, where the author describes how the teen raised money by collecting funds to pay school tuition for street kids. Okina was inspired to do this after he met a 13-year-old homeless kid named Frederick who could not attend school and decided to help him and others like him.

Do social determinants of health PROMOTE WELL-BEING or CREATE/INCREASE DISEASE RISK?

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Answer: Social determinants affect physical and mental health outcomes, especially in childhood. Project provides insight for those seeking to begin clinical-community parterships.

Answer:

create/increase disease risk

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Explanation:

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Continue your research on a current event. Select one reliable news story on the topic that contains at least one graphical element. In one to two paragraphs, briefly describe the graphic(s) and then explain the purpose of the graphic(s) and how it affects the "telling" of the information from the original source. Your selected source should be correctly cited, using the MLA format for in-text citations and providing a Works Cited page. View the MLA guidelines for citation style.

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Answer:

We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more perfect Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility, provide for the common defense, promote the general Welfare, and secure the Blessings of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity, do ordain and establish this Constitution for the United States of America.

Read this heading and subheading from When Birds Get Flu.

WHO’S WHO? The Medical Team

Based on the passage and this heading and subheading, what do you predict this section is about?

the different types of positions available in the medical field
the education necessary to be a part of the medical field
the reasons those on the medical team are studying bird flu
the people who make up the medical team studying bird flu

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Answer:

The people who make up the medical team studying bird flu

Explanation:

Drag each tile to the correct box.
Put the steps in order to show how an author introduces and develops a thesis in a text.
The author supports the thesis.
The author restates the thesis.
1
The author states the thesis.

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While writing a thesis, the author first states a thesis, restates it and finally support the thesis, the correct order is 3, 2, and 1.

What is a thesis?

A thesis statement is a statement describing that states the position that the paper will take. This statement should be specific as well as debatable.

Just before writing a thesis, the author should first state the thesis, then restate it, and finally support the thesis.

Thus, the correct order is 3, 2, and 1.

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The missing image of the question is attached below:

Opinion writing about tourism can replace oil as a source of income in Oman

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Explanation:

Tourism certainly has the potential of taking over the burden of powering Oman’s economy and replacing its dependence on income from oil.

Oman is the second country in the Gulf Cooperation Council (GCC) states, after the United Arab Emirates (UAE) that welcomes an increasing number of tourists every year. Out of the 9.3 million passengers arriving in the country in 2015, about 36 per cent were tourists.

Select the correct texts in the passage.
Which two details best develop the central idea about Julius Caesar?

Dictatorships
by Hal Marcovitz
(excerpt from “The Rise of Julius Caesar”)

Sulla was a brutal and relentless dictator. But one enemy who escaped his wrath was Gaius Julius Caesar. Caesar was born in 100 BCE to a wealthy family. As a nephew of Sulla’s opponent Marius, Caesar found himself on Sulla’s list of enemies. No doubt he too would have been killed, but his family intervened, and Sulla reluctantly spared his life. Next, Sulla ordered Caesar to divorce his wife. Caesar refused and fled the city. He joined a Roman army campaigning in Turkey and did not return until after Sulla’s death in 78 BCE.

A. Sulla was a brutal and relentless dictator.
B. Caesar was born in 100 BCE to a wealthy family.
C. As a nephew of Sulla’s opponent Marius, Caesar found himself on Sulla’s list of enemies.
D. Next, Sulla ordered Caesar to divorce his wife.
E. Caesar refused and fled the city.

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Answer:

C. As a nephew of Sulla’s opponent Marius, Caesar found himself on Sulla’s list of enemies.

E. Caesar refused and fled the city.

Explanation:

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The two details that best develop the central idea about Julius Caesar are:

C. As a nephew of Sulla’s opponent Marius, Caesar found himself on Sulla’s list of enemies.E. Caesar refused and fled the city.

What is a Central Idea?

This refers to the theme of a text that shows the main thing that the author wants to convey to the readers.

Hence, we can see that from the given text, we can see that there is the use of narration to show the details of Ceasar and his ancestry and also how he is an enemy of Sulla as contained in options C and E.

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1.The storm passed quickly through the area last night, and it caused a lot of damage.

2.We will be on vacation next week we will be unable to attend your party.

run-on or correct?

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C6: How did Roald's mother respond when he told her about the punishment? *
She gave Roald extra punishments for his behavior
She went to his teacher's house to thank him
She went to his teacher's house to tell him off/complain and moved him to another
school
She called the school to ask for more information
Roald Dahl

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She called the school to ask for more information

Why is it important to be as media literate as possible?
A. You can only get the news through visual media.
B. The mass media aren't targeting a certain audience.
c. Media access is very expensive.
D. Many media messages have a hidden agenda.

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Answer:

Many media messages have a hidden agenda.

i think the answer is d. :)
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